I feel horrible. She doesn't
love me and I wander around
the house like a sewing machine
that's just finished sewing
a turd to a garbage can lid.
The images, humor, and sentiment in this great poem by Richard Brautigan are all held together by enjambment. Enjambment is when the end of a line runs into the next, often creating functionally two sentences or meanings. They are the bread and butter of this poem, its substance. A few examples:
"I feel horrible. She doesn't."
"I feel horrible. She doesn't love me."
"I wander around the house"
"I [am] like a sewing machine that's just finished"
etc etc
The poem also has the delightful gross out image, "like a sewing machine that's just finished sewing a turd to a garbage can lid." That's quite messy, I'd imagine. I love it.
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